Shield 'n mud, postw excercise

This is something I'v done when I was trying postwork/2D. I'v made that pretty bad render (lower image), then I'v started postworking on it in corell photopaint. I did the drawing useing a mouse, I had no tablet back then. Only the "falling rain" is a computer generated effect, everything else is done by me. I know the result is far from good, but I was pretty happy even with this, because I'm very bad at every kind of 2D drawing
Original render made with 3dsmax5 (lower image), the post worked (upper image) version was done in corell photopaint.